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英语改错I first met li meng at a friend birthday party five year

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I first met li meng at a friend birthday party five years ago.Then i invited li meng over in my place.We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends.Three years ago
,li meng's parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday.Li meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there.Last year
I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week.Li meng came see me every day.Then,her
father has changed jobs and they moved to another city.Since then we haven't see each other much,but we've kept writing to each other.
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I first met li meng at a 【friend's】 birthday party five years ago.Then i invited li meng over 【to】 my place.We 【listened】 to my CDs together and soon became good friends.Three years 【later】,li meng's parents invited 【me】 to spend two wonderful 【weeks】 in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday.Li meng and I loved walking along the 【beautiful】 beaches there.Last year I was ill 【and】 had to stay in hospital for a week.Li meng came 【to】 see me every day.Then,her father 【has 删去】changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven't 【seen估计是笔误】 each other much,but we've kept writing to each other.