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要求:本短文有十个错误(仅限于单词或复合词),请用批注形式修改这十处错误
Most studies suggest that when women and men do the same job and have the experience,pay rates tend to be similar.Most of the dollar differences stem from fact that women tend to be more frequently employed and have more years on the job.Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors.First,will most of them continue part-time jobs after they have children?A break in their employment,or a decision to do a part- time job,will slow its raises and promotions.Second,will male-dominating companies elevate women to higher-paid jobs at the different rate as they elevate men?On some fields,this had clearly not happened.Many men,for example,have committed their lives to teaching careers,yet relative few have become principals or headmasters.
1 Most of the dollar differences stem from fact that women tend to be more frequently employed and have more years on the job.
在fact前要加the.more要改成less
2 Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors.
rest 要改为 rests ,part time 要给为full time
3 will slow its raises and promotions.
its 要改为 their
4 Second,will male-dominating companies elevate women to higher-paid jobs at the different rate as they elevate men?
different 要改为 same
5 On some fields
On 要改为In
6 Many men,for example,have committed their lives to teaching careers,yet relative few have become principals or headmasters.
men 改为 women relative 要改为 relatively
再问: 你这里只有9个啊,一共要改出10个,还有1个呢,你有没有把握做对啊,这是很重要的作业
再答: will slow its raises and promotions. 这句话后面应该还有内容吧?你是不是少打了
再问: 没有,我去全部复制过来了,你再好好看看好不好。。还差一个呢,,拜托啦
再答: 应该是will slow its raises and promotions because it would for men。。把 because改为as