急,修改一下我的英语作文,晚上10点以前,
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急,修改一下我的英语作文,晚上10点以前,
nothing is impossible in my eyes
Everyone has a dream,every dreams will have a ladder,it makes everyone’ dream come true,it is insisted.If you want to make your dream come true,you will must after a long journey.And this will be a very difficult process.I think that a person only to pursue unremittingly,he can achieve the objective.You will can do anything you want as long as you unremittingly.
nothing is impossible in my eyes
Everyone has a dream,every dreams will have a ladder,it makes everyone’ dream come true,it is insisted.If you want to make your dream come true,you will must after a long journey.And this will be a very difficult process.I think that a person only to pursue unremittingly,he can achieve the objective.You will can do anything you want as long as you unremittingly.
1 it makes everyone’s dream come true
2 if it is insisted 如果被坚持 应该加 if 吧.
3 you will must after a long journey 太过chinglish
建议改成 you will go through a lot of difficulties and suffer a lot .
4 process 应该用 task 任务 比较好 如果想用这个词 建议把difficult 改成 long
5 I think that only should a person need to purse unremittingly比较高端.so he can achieve.so 不能掉
6 You can do anything you want as long as you 不用 will 了
are unremitting 为什么 you 后面之间加副词 ==明显错了
7every dream
every 后面接名词 单数
手打好辛苦 - 不懂就问
高一水平 如果有错误 请多指教
再问: it is insisted 如果被坚持?这个没用if,我的意思是这就是坚持 我的you后面没用副词,您指的哪一句
再答: 我天 = =insist 是动词 it is persistence(毅力) it is insisted 你这个意思是 它被坚持,,,,你肯定在上初中吧 加油哦
2 if it is insisted 如果被坚持 应该加 if 吧.
3 you will must after a long journey 太过chinglish
建议改成 you will go through a lot of difficulties and suffer a lot .
4 process 应该用 task 任务 比较好 如果想用这个词 建议把difficult 改成 long
5 I think that only should a person need to purse unremittingly比较高端.so he can achieve.so 不能掉
6 You can do anything you want as long as you 不用 will 了
are unremitting 为什么 you 后面之间加副词 ==明显错了
7every dream
every 后面接名词 单数
手打好辛苦 - 不懂就问
高一水平 如果有错误 请多指教
再问: it is insisted 如果被坚持?这个没用if,我的意思是这就是坚持 我的you后面没用副词,您指的哪一句
再答: 我天 = =insist 是动词 it is persistence(毅力) it is insisted 你这个意思是 它被坚持,,,,你肯定在上初中吧 加油哦