作业帮英语作文的修改 （内容稍微变可以）
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英语作文的修改 （内容稍微变可以）
多用first,after,then,when,after that 等词
July 15th was special and hard day to me.Because is my birthday.On that day.I work up at 9:00.I washed my face and bushed my teeth,after my friends came to my home and congatulated my birthday with me together then we went to boring but I played it first time so I can'tvery well Next we went to my friend Chinase restaurant at 2:00.Because they held a my birthday party .They sent me a lot of nice presents I wass very happy.We sang songs played games and danced afterwe went to park at 9:00.We displayed firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at23.30.l was very tired but l was very happy.So l couldn't sleep soon.
l realized that everyday could be as happy as birthday since people around mee all love me
多用first,after,then,when,after that 等词
July 15th was special and hard day to me.Because is my birthday.On that day.I work up at 9:00.I washed my face and bushed my teeth,after my friends came to my home and congatulated my birthday with me together then we went to boring but I played it first time so I can'tvery well Next we went to my friend Chinase restaurant at 2:00.Because they held a my birthday party .They sent me a lot of nice presents I wass very happy.We sang songs played games and danced afterwe went to park at 9:00.We displayed firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at23.30.l was very tired but l was very happy.So l couldn't sleep soon.
l realized that everyday could be as happy as birthday since people around mee all love me
To me,July 15th was a special and hard day for it's my birthday.On that day.I woke up at 9:00 then I washed my face and brushed my teeth,after my friends visited my house and celebrated my birthday with me,we felt boring.So we went to my friend's Chinase restaurant at 2:00 for they have held one of my birthday parties .They sent me a lot of nice presents I was very happy.We sang songs,played games and danced .after we went to park at 9:00.We made firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at 23.30.l was very tired but very happy.So l couldn't fall asleep soon.
l realized that where friends around,love around
再问： 我不是感觉无聊 我是想说（我和我朋友一起玩保龄球 但我第一次玩 所以玩得不太好）
再答： Since it was my first time go bowling with my friends, i didnt play well.
I went home at 23.30.l was very tired but very happy.So l couldn't fall asleep soon.
l realized that where friends around,love around
再问： 我不是感觉无聊 我是想说（我和我朋友一起玩保龄球 但我第一次玩 所以玩得不太好）
再答： Since it was my first time go bowling with my friends, i didnt play well.
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