作业帮大家帮我看下这个英语演讲稿
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大家帮我看下这个英语演讲稿
Hello,everyone!It’s my honor to speakhere,and I am very glad to share my topic with you.Then today I'd like totalk something about the healthy living habits.
First,we shouldn’t eat the junk food like hamburger,cola and others.It’s bad for us,so we should not eat the junk food.And we should eat more fruit and morevegetables.You know that “an apple a day,keep the doctor away.” The fruit is goodfor our health.And the vegetables are necessary for human body.
Second,we should do more exercise.Moreexercise can make us stronger.And we should seriously do sports.If we do notdo sports seriously,it is not useful.And do exercises can make us happy.
Third,maintaining a good mood.A good moodcan make person healthy.But bad mood will lead to illness.So,you should dosome things to make you happy.
Fourth,get up early and go to bed early.It’s important for us to maintaining a good night's sleep.
OK,that’s all,thanks for listening.
楼主初一水平,很多没学的都是用翻译器翻译的,各位帮忙看下有什么语法上的错误.
Hello,everyone!It’s my honor to speakhere,and I am very glad to share my topic with you.Then today I'd like totalk something about the healthy living habits.
First,we shouldn’t eat the junk food like hamburger,cola and others.It’s bad for us,so we should not eat the junk food.And we should eat more fruit and morevegetables.You know that “an apple a day,keep the doctor away.” The fruit is goodfor our health.And the vegetables are necessary for human body.
Second,we should do more exercise.Moreexercise can make us stronger.And we should seriously do sports.If we do notdo sports seriously,it is not useful.And do exercises can make us happy.
Third,maintaining a good mood.A good moodcan make person healthy.But bad mood will lead to illness.So,you should dosome things to make you happy.
Fourth,get up early and go to bed early.It’s important for us to maintaining a good night's sleep.
OK,that’s all,thanks for listening.
楼主初一水平,很多没学的都是用翻译器翻译的,各位帮忙看下有什么语法上的错误.
1.It's bad for us,so we should not eat the junk food.
bad在写作中使用的太泛,在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等.
2.And the vegetables are necessary for human body.
for human body 冠词缺失
3.It's important for us to maintaining a good night's
sleep.
建议将to+doing改为to+do.
总体来说,写的不错,有些单词间没有空格
bad在写作中使用的太泛,在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等.
2.And the vegetables are necessary for human body.
for human body 冠词缺失
3.It's important for us to maintaining a good night's
sleep.
建议将to+doing改为to+do.
总体来说,写的不错,有些单词间没有空格