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帮我看下这骗文章有错没?
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Hello, everyone. I'm very pleased to meet you. Firstly,I'd like to introduce myself to you. My name is fangdan, and my English name is Lynn. I was graduated from Henan Foreign Trade School.my major is Business English.I;m very outgoing,friendly and confidence.I like dancing and singing. But I only good at dancing. beacause of this, I can apply it to my teaching. Of course, I'm short at the teaching experience, but I will work hard and try my best to do duing the teaching. So I believe working hark can bring us more oppotunities, I am a hard working person especially do the things which i am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
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I;m very outgoing,friendly and confidence
I'm an very outgoing,friendly and confident person.
but i only good at dancing.
but I am only good at dancing.
I'm short at the teaching experience,
I'm lacking of teaching experince,
duing the teaching
during my teaching
especially do the things
especially at the things

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