作业帮帮忙看看下述英语句子有什么问题?
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帮忙看看下述英语句子有什么问题?
In optimistic side,when the reader confront difficulties on reading,he can use mobile phone to inquire about it.
There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are on excessive packaging,which attracts our attentions.
By doing it,I ensure that businessmen are the greatest winner.
The consumer should be sensible,don't judge a good by its excessive packaging.
I ensure that everyone is not willing to see the scene,the library become the place to play the phone,who can imagine that everybody use the phone keeping their head down in the library?
或是怎样修改下会更好,
In optimistic side,when the reader confront difficulties on reading,he can use mobile phone to inquire about it.
There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are on excessive packaging,which attracts our attentions.
By doing it,I ensure that businessmen are the greatest winner.
The consumer should be sensible,don't judge a good by its excessive packaging.
I ensure that everyone is not willing to see the scene,the library become the place to play the phone,who can imagine that everybody use the phone keeping their head down in the library?
或是怎样修改下会更好,
On the optimistic side,when the reader confront difficulties in reading,he can use mobile phone to inquire about it.
There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are with excessive packaging,which absolutely attracts our attention.
By doing so,I＇m sure that businessmen are the greatest winner.
The consumer should be sensible and don't judge goods by its excessive packaging.
I believethat everyone is not willing to see the library to become the place with phones． Who can imagine that everybody are using the phones while keeping their mindsin the library?
There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are with excessive packaging,which absolutely attracts our attention.
By doing so,I＇m sure that businessmen are the greatest winner.
The consumer should be sensible and don't judge goods by its excessive packaging.
I believethat everyone is not willing to see the library to become the place with phones． Who can imagine that everybody are using the phones while keeping their mindsin the library?