作业帮自己写的英语作文,指出问题()
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自己写的英语作文,指出问题()
Becoming of a successfull guy,I think,is what everyone's dream,so I am going to communicate wth everybody to share my wish for the future.Now I ,a normal student,studties in XIhua uniersity,a school of science and engineering,seeing the setting sun at dusk,I consider what I do next year.It is so neccessary for me to prepare for postgraduate exam,a path to achieve my dream.I take it that it is so hard for me,many choices are lifed in my crossroad of life .
Becoming of a successfull guy,I think,is what everyone's dream,so I am going to communicate wth everybody to share my wish for the future.Now I ,a normal student,studties in XIhua uniersity,a school of science and engineering,seeing the setting sun at dusk,I consider what I do next year.It is so neccessary for me to prepare for postgraduate exam,a path to achieve my dream.I take it that it is so hard for me,many choices are lifed in my crossroad of life .
To become a successfull person, I think, is everyone's dream. I am going to communicate to everybody to share my wish for the future. I am a normal student who is studying in XIhua uniersity. XiHua ...
再问： thank you for your help I ,a normal student, studties in XIhua uniersity, a school of science and engineering a path to achieve my dream 这两句在考试中是用同位语表达好还是用定语从句表达更好 英语要尽量避免重复，This is a path to achieve my dream. The path is hard for me 能换一个词么？
再答： to avoid your worry of 尽量避免重复, you can write, 'A postgraduate degree is a path to achieve my dream.
再问： thank you for your help I ,a normal student, studties in XIhua uniersity, a school of science and engineering a path to achieve my dream 这两句在考试中是用同位语表达好还是用定语从句表达更好 英语要尽量避免重复，This is a path to achieve my dream. The path is hard for me 能换一个词么？
再答： to avoid your worry of 尽量避免重复, you can write, 'A postgraduate degree is a path to achieve my dream.