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求高人、修改小女子的作文.吐血言谢!

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求高人、修改小女子的作文.吐血言谢!
题目是、Tom给我来信说他劝好友Andy戒烟、Andy却说要绝交他很烦恼,求建议.
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are upset about your relationship with Andy.In reply to your letter of your friendship’s problems.I’m writing to express my ideas.
From my own perspective,you needn’t worry about your friendship with Andy.As a matter of fact,he maybe not really want to be a stranger to you.It is apparent that what you said maybe made he felt that you didn’t like him any more.I suggest that you should tell him you are still want to play with him,and try to make him not smoke in the most periphrastic way.
All in all,I believe that Andy will apologize to you before long.I hope your friendship last forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are upset about your relationship with Andy.In reply to your letter about your problem,I’m writing to express my idea.
From my own perspective,you needn’t worry about your friendship with Andy.As a matter of fact,maybe he doesn't really want to be a stranger to you.It is apparent that what you said may made he feel that you didn’t like him any more.I suggest that you should tell him that you still want to play with him,and try to make him not smoke privately.
yours,
Hua Li
(改了改语法 但我想说 有的词简单就好,何况这在写信)