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Dear Jane
Glad to hear from you and you are welcome to China in July. Let me tell you some manners.
Firstly, what make people surprised is that you hut and kiss friend you meet. We usually shake hands with friend. Secondly , when praised by others , we are used to saying “It’ over –praised “ to show good manner . thirdly, when receiving a gift from others. We may say “ It’s unnecessary”. On the contrary, it’s politeness to say “Thanks”. Finally, we are fond of talking loudly while having dinner, instead of being quiet.
Different cultures produce different customs. “Do as the Romans when in Rome” you will fall in love with here.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. 老师辛苦了,我是小黄同学。给出分数
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Dear Jane Glad to hear from you and you are welcome to China in July. Let me tell you some manners. Firstly, what make people surprised is that you hut and kiss friend you meet. We usually shake hands with friend. Secondly , when praised by others , we are used to saying “It’ over –praised “ to show good manner . thirdly, when receiving a gift from others. We may say “ It’s unnecessary”. On the contrary, it’s politeness to say “Thanks”. Finally, we are fond of talking loudly while having dinner, instead of being quiet. Different cultures produce different customs. “Do as the Romans when in Rome” you will fall in love with here. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. 老师辛苦了,我是小黄同学。给出分数 1、拼写错误。改为hug,拥抱 2、改为the friend 3、改为friends 4、这里应该是:others,we 用逗号,本是一句话中的。 5、改为polite 6、改为our customs。 7、内容丰富,连接紧凑,句式丰富。但是个别用词有些不准。平时注意吸收一些地道的英语用词。给分19分。下划线部分是精华。小黄同学加油!
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最终答案:略