作业帮大家帮我看下有没有语病?
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大家帮我看下有没有语病?
Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .
（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.
（2）long long ago ,
people came to visit the castle ,some of them said that they have seen several
ghost and heared a little sob from ghost[ɡəʊst] unaccountably .
（3）Do you know why ghost appear and disappear in the castle?
Let us explain[ɪk'spleɪn] something to you about the ghost.
（4）Tower of London has ever served as prison['prɪzn],there is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] with instrument['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] under the prison .many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] meet with a tragic[ˈtrædʒɪk] death in the dungeon.（5）moreover,Outside Castle's Tower Hill is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n],so the guillotine has many ghosts without head.（6）besides,bloody tower is also a place of torture and death.it lies in the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.
Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .
（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.
（2）long long ago ,
people came to visit the castle ,some of them said that they have seen several
ghost and heared a little sob from ghost[ɡəʊst] unaccountably .
（3）Do you know why ghost appear and disappear in the castle?
Let us explain[ɪk'spleɪn] something to you about the ghost.
（4）Tower of London has ever served as prison['prɪzn],there is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] with instrument['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] under the prison .many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] meet with a tragic[ˈtrædʒɪk] death in the dungeon.（5）moreover,Outside Castle's Tower Hill is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n],so the guillotine has many ghosts without head.（6）besides,bloody tower is also a place of torture and death.it lies in the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.
Today,let me introduce the Tower of London.
（1）As we all know,the Tower of London is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],but it is not a regular castle.It is said that the castle is filled with mysterious stories.
（2）Some visitors claimed that they had seen ghosts and heard sob from ghosts[ɡəʊst].
（3）Do you know why ghosts appear in the castle?Let me explain[ɪk'spleɪn].
（4）Tower of London had served as a prison['prɪzn].There is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] filled with instruments['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] in the prison.Many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] died tragically[ˈtrædʒɪk] in the dungeon.
5）Moreover,outside Castle's Tower Hill,there is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n]which is surrounded by ghosts without head.
(6）In addition,Bloody Tower is also a place of torture and death.It locates at the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.
（1）As we all know,the Tower of London is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],but it is not a regular castle.It is said that the castle is filled with mysterious stories.
（2）Some visitors claimed that they had seen ghosts and heard sob from ghosts[ɡəʊst].
（3）Do you know why ghosts appear in the castle?Let me explain[ɪk'spleɪn].
（4）Tower of London had served as a prison['prɪzn].There is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] filled with instruments['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] in the prison.Many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] died tragically[ˈtrædʒɪk] in the dungeon.
5）Moreover,outside Castle's Tower Hill,there is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n]which is surrounded by ghosts without head.
(6）In addition,Bloody Tower is also a place of torture and death.It locates at the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.