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英语帮忙上台演讲hello everyone my name is xxx..I have many hobbies,

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上台演讲
hello everyone my name is xxx..I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, Listening to music.

Then Bring to you the a music
放完.
i hope that everyone in this class could enjoy the lovely simple life in the music world.
有什么问题嘛.需要改哪里
第二句 the 后面的a 要去掉.bring to也觉得别扭,要表示给他家带来音乐,可以说then let's enjoy some music.
最后一句中,enjoy不合适,你希望大家都能感受(个人觉得享受不妥)到这个音乐情景中的简单的生活.用feel合适.
lovely 形容生活不合适.应该去掉