作业帮求职信,帮我看看有没有语法错误,
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求职信,帮我看看有没有语法错误,
求职信（122）
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in the Youth Daily of the January 5th 2010.
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a reporter.To begin with,I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor of journalism.What's more,I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please free to contact me at any time at 010-88888888.I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
求职信（122）
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in the Youth Daily of the January 5th 2010.
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a reporter.To begin with,I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor of journalism.What's more,I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please free to contact me at any time at 010-88888888.I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
写得挺好的,格式我觉得用全部左对齐就行.是不是有点太正式了,比如用到了rapport 这词儿,还有这么简单的信里,复杂的句型就不必了,not only ..but also,to begin with ,whatis more 太拖沓啦.第二三段建议改为：
In July,as bachelor of journalism,I will graduate from Peking University.Four years'theory study and society practice help me know how to communicate with people of all walks and ages.I believe I am qualified for this position.
Interview offer or any question from you,will be much appreciated.Please feel free to contact me at 010-xxxxxxx.
In July,as bachelor of journalism,I will graduate from Peking University.Four years'theory study and society practice help me know how to communicate with people of all walks and ages.I believe I am qualified for this position.
Interview offer or any question from you,will be much appreciated.Please feel free to contact me at 010-xxxxxxx.