作业帮帮我指点一下我的英语短文
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帮我指点一下我的英语短文
短文如下：
My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,fall and winter.Spring is beautiful.We can plant trees and fly kites.Summer is hot,but it's interesting.We can go swimming,eat ice-creams and enjoy the sunshine.And,a very long holiday is wait for me.Fall is a foison season.We can pick apples and many fruit.Winter is cold,but it's very pleasing.We can play with the snow,make a snowman,ride on a sledge,skate and do a lots of things.In a word,I like summer best.One of the most important reason is in summer,we can have a very long holiday!
短文如下：
My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,fall and winter.Spring is beautiful.We can plant trees and fly kites.Summer is hot,but it's interesting.We can go swimming,eat ice-creams and enjoy the sunshine.And,a very long holiday is wait for me.Fall is a foison season.We can pick apples and many fruit.Winter is cold,but it's very pleasing.We can play with the snow,make a snowman,ride on a sledge,skate and do a lots of things.In a word,I like summer best.One of the most important reason is in summer,we can have a very long holiday!
1.第三行这句不对...a very long holiday is wait for me.没有is wait这种表达,要么wait加ING,要么改成：a very long holiday is coming.
2.倒数第三行skate and do a lots of things.这里的冠词a要去掉.或改成a lot of ...
3.最后一句最好改成表语从句加引导词that：
One of the most important reason is that we can have a very long holiday in summer!
2.倒数第三行skate and do a lots of things.这里的冠词a要去掉.或改成a lot of ...
3.最后一句最好改成表语从句加引导词that：
One of the most important reason is that we can have a very long holiday in summer!