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英语改错 it was my 18th birthday yesterday ,as the age is special for our teenagers ,so my ...
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it was my 18th birthday yesterday ,as the age is special for our teenagers ,so my parents held a birthday party for me at home .with my parents and some of my goodfriends attend my birthday party ,i really had unforgettable experience .we sang songs ,dancing and played games together .we all enjoy ourselves very much .during theparty ,my parent told me that from then on i was no longer a child and an adult .they also said i should be more independent and responsibly.hearing their words ,i was greatly encouraged.it was just at that moment when i felt i was a grown-up .
it was my 18th birthday yesterday ,as the age is special for our teenagers ,so my parents held a birthday party for me at home ()and some of my goodfriends attend(ed) my birthday party ,i really had (an) unforgettable experience .we sang songs ,danc(ed) and played games together .we all enjoy(ed) ourselves very much .during the party ,my parent told me that from then on i was no longer a child (but) an adult .they also said i should be more independent and responsibl(e). (H)earing their words ,i was greatly encouraged.it was just at that moment when i felt i was a grown-up .