作业帮关于时态.太混乱了,麻烦帮看看要怎么改,
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关于时态.太混乱了,麻烦帮看看要怎么改,
这是一小段关于电影的描述,自己写的,时态很混乱...
如果我想用一般现在时来描述人物性格的话
那中间涉及到描述剧情时能转成过去时吗?(比如像这段里在最后面一小部分,从So,when the officiator asked her “Do you…”on wedding day in the past 开始后面都是描述剧情)
描述剧情是不是要用过去时好一些呢?如果是,加in the past就可以吗?
Maggie was a independent and strong girl,she had a thirst for love and marriage,but when the wedding day came.She felt afraid,that was gamophobia.Why afraid?Maybe the reason was the first night as her grandma said,or she couldn’t focused her attention on only one thing as her fourth boyfriend said,but the most important reason was that she lost herself,she didn’t know what she really wanted,she always be a little tail of her boyfriends but never being herself.She was so easy to fall in love,didn’t even really know if that was love or not.So,when the officiator asked her “Do you…”on wedding day in the past,she realized that she should think about it more,but there’s no time to wait,so ,turned around and ran away.
这是一小段关于电影的描述,自己写的,时态很混乱...
如果我想用一般现在时来描述人物性格的话
那中间涉及到描述剧情时能转成过去时吗?(比如像这段里在最后面一小部分,从So,when the officiator asked her “Do you…”on wedding day in the past 开始后面都是描述剧情)
描述剧情是不是要用过去时好一些呢?如果是,加in the past就可以吗?
Maggie was a independent and strong girl,she had a thirst for love and marriage,but when the wedding day came.She felt afraid,that was gamophobia.Why afraid?Maybe the reason was the first night as her grandma said,or she couldn’t focused her attention on only one thing as her fourth boyfriend said,but the most important reason was that she lost herself,she didn’t know what she really wanted,she always be a little tail of her boyfriends but never being herself.She was so easy to fall in love,didn’t even really know if that was love or not.So,when the officiator asked her “Do you…”on wedding day in the past,she realized that she should think about it more,but there’s no time to wait,so ,turned around and ran away.
she didn’t know what she really wanted ---WANT
she always be a little tail of her boyfriends but never being herself--- always had being a .用过去进行时比较好 表示一直都怎么怎么.
感觉是有点乱 还有就是第一句里 A变成AN
Why afraid改成Why be afraid
the most important reason was that she lost herself 改成she had lost herself
she always be a little tail of her boyfriends but never being herself--- always had being a .用过去进行时比较好 表示一直都怎么怎么.
感觉是有点乱 还有就是第一句里 A变成AN
Why afraid改成Why be afraid
the most important reason was that she lost herself 改成she had lost herself