作业帮谁帮我修改一下英语作文
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谁帮我修改一下英语作文
In college,reserving a seat is a common phenomenon.So different people hold different views about whether or not should reserve a seat.Some people think that convenient their study.Besides,we can with familiarity friend study together.And some students worry about late without seats.
However,many students don't agree with this kind of behavior.First they think it is immoral behavior.Second,this kind of behavior will destroy the friendship between classmates.Third,left a bad impression to others.
Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the second.I hold the view that everyone to do things for others.Besides,we should not to be late.If everyone harbor the idea,I do believe that,we can happy learning.
In college,reserving a seat is a common phenomenon.So different people hold different views about whether or not should reserve a seat.Some people think that convenient their study.Besides,we can with familiarity friend study together.And some students worry about late without seats.
However,many students don't agree with this kind of behavior.First they think it is immoral behavior.Second,this kind of behavior will destroy the friendship between classmates.Third,left a bad impression to others.
Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the second.I hold the view that everyone to do things for others.Besides,we should not to be late.If everyone harbor the idea,I do believe that,we can happy learning.
（it's already good enough,but a few comments and corrections which you can find from comparing your original one)
In college,reserving a seat is a common phenomenon.So different people have different views about whether or not should reserve a seat.Some people think that it is convenient for their study.Also they can have friends to study next to them.And some students worry about
coming late without seats.
However,many students don't agree with this kind of behavior.First,they think it is immoral
behavior.Second,this kind of behavior will destroy the friendship between classmates.Third,it gaves a bad impression to others.
Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the second.My point is:Everyone should do things
for others.Besides,we should not be late.If everyone harbor the idea,I do believe that we will be happy in our college study.
In college,reserving a seat is a common phenomenon.So different people have different views about whether or not should reserve a seat.Some people think that it is convenient for their study.Also they can have friends to study next to them.And some students worry about
coming late without seats.
However,many students don't agree with this kind of behavior.First,they think it is immoral
behavior.Second,this kind of behavior will destroy the friendship between classmates.Third,it gaves a bad impression to others.
Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the second.My point is:Everyone should do things
for others.Besides,we should not be late.If everyone harbor the idea,I do believe that we will be happy in our college study.