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Self Introduction
My name is Fang Lurongzi.I’m a 14-year-old girl who is from No.4 Middle School of Anqing.
I have good study habits and I love thinking and analyzing problems.So I took part in a lot of contests and have gotten many awards.
I love my class and get along well with other schoolmates.In my teachers’ eyes,I’m a good student; in my classmates’ eyes,I’m a good friend; in my parents’ eyes,I’m a good kid.
Compared with other children,I’m more independent.Because my parents don’t work in Anqing,I started to live in a host family when I was 8.Ordinarily,I can not only take good care of myself,but also help my parents do some chores,like washing the dishes,sweeping the floor and so on.
I have many hobbies.I started to learn to play the erhu since I was 4.I have also learned handwriting,dancing,table tennis and I-go .I always travel during my holidays.So I have been to many beautiful and famous cities.
In my spare time,I’d like to do some social activities.I have been to the Old people’s Home to chat with the old.I am also a member in Anqing’s English Cornor.However,I am the youngest one.
I am interested in knowing this colorful world;
I am confident to face my bright future.
Optimistic,independent,confident and hard-working.This is me —— a growing happy girl.
快……明天就要
Self Introduction
My name is Fang Lurongzi.I’m a 14-year-old girl who is from No.4 Middle School of Anqing.
I have good study habits and I love thinking and analyzing problems.So I took part in a lot of contests and have gotten many awards.
I love my class and get along well with other schoolmates.In my teachers’ eyes,I’m a good student; in my classmates’ eyes,I’m a good friend; in my parents’ eyes,I’m a good kid.
Compared with other children,I’m more independent.Because my parents don’t work in Anqing,I started to live in a host family when I was 8.Ordinarily,I can not only take good care of myself,but also help my parents do some chores,like washing the dishes,sweeping the floor and so on.
I have many hobbies.I started to learn to play the erhu since I was 4.I have also learned handwriting,dancing,table tennis and I-go .I always travel during my holidays.So I have been to many beautiful and famous cities.
In my spare time,I’d like to do some social activities.I have been to the Old people’s Home to chat with the old.I am also a member in Anqing’s English Cornor.However,I am the youngest one.
I am interested in knowing this colorful world;
I am confident to face my bright future.
Optimistic,independent,confident and hard-working.This is me —— a growing happy girl.
快……明天就要
Self Introduction
My name is Fang Lurongzi,a 14-year-old girl from No.4 Middle School of Anqing.
I have formed good study habits and I love thinking and analyzing problems.So I took part in a lot of contests and have gotten many awards.
I love my class and get along well with other schoolmates.In my teachers'eyes,I'm a good student; in my classmates'eyes,I'm a good friend; in my parents'eyes,I'm a good kid.
Compared with other children,I'm more independent.Because my parents don't work in Anqing,I started to live in a host family when I was 8.Ordinarily,I not only take good care of myself,but also help my parents do some chores,like washing the dishes,sweeping the floor and so on.
I have many hobbies.I started to learn to play erhu since I was 4.I have also learned handwriting,dancing,table tennis and I-go.I always travel during my holidays.So I have been to many beautiful and famous cities.
In my spare time,I like taking part in social activities.I have been to the Nursing Home to chat with the old.I am also the youngest member of Anqing's English Cornor.
I am interested in knowing this colorful world and I am confident about my future.
Optimistic,independent,confident and hard-working.This is me —— a growing happy girl.
改了一些细节的东西,你看看,写的不错.
My name is Fang Lurongzi,a 14-year-old girl from No.4 Middle School of Anqing.
I have formed good study habits and I love thinking and analyzing problems.So I took part in a lot of contests and have gotten many awards.
I love my class and get along well with other schoolmates.In my teachers'eyes,I'm a good student; in my classmates'eyes,I'm a good friend; in my parents'eyes,I'm a good kid.
Compared with other children,I'm more independent.Because my parents don't work in Anqing,I started to live in a host family when I was 8.Ordinarily,I not only take good care of myself,but also help my parents do some chores,like washing the dishes,sweeping the floor and so on.
I have many hobbies.I started to learn to play erhu since I was 4.I have also learned handwriting,dancing,table tennis and I-go.I always travel during my holidays.So I have been to many beautiful and famous cities.
In my spare time,I like taking part in social activities.I have been to the Nursing Home to chat with the old.I am also the youngest member of Anqing's English Cornor.
I am interested in knowing this colorful world and I am confident about my future.
Optimistic,independent,confident and hard-working.This is me —— a growing happy girl.
改了一些细节的东西,你看看,写的不错.