我写了一篇英语童话.......

我写了一篇英语童话.......
She is an angel who is liked by everyone at first sight .She has a pretty face.And she has two big eyes.But she is very different from other angels,it is because she has only one wing.But as you know,the others has a pair of wings.She is so sad,and belittle herself.She has never spoken to others,even if she has wonderful voice.When an angle tried to speak with her,she always remained dumb.Because she thinks other angles spit on her,She was used to go about alone.But when she is alone,she always ask to herself sadly:” Why do I have only one wing,why am I different from others,why?”she knows:she can’t fly as others,so she have never tried to fly in the sky.
One day ,she sits on the margin of a lake lonely.And she enjoys herself.She likes the blue sky,the birds singing,the green trees,the beautiful flowers,and so on.There is a family having a picnic near the lake ,the mother is cooking,the father is fishing,and the little boy is playing himself.
Suddenly,the angle heard a woman creaming,then she sees the boy falling into the water.The boy maks frenzied efforts in the water.And his parents are very worried,but they all can’t swim ,and water is so deep that they can’t jump into the lake,or they will be died with the boy.”what can I do?The boy will be died if no one helps him,”the angle thinks.Then ,she tries to expand her wing.To her surprise,she flies to the boy easily,but not quite smooth.She saves the boy.The boy’s parents are very thank her for her help.“Are you a angle?You are so nice and goodness of heart.”The boy asks her.”Yes.Thank you for your praise .”
all at once,she was clear about:she can fly even if she has only one wing.Then,the another wing comes out by a miracle .She is so happy,she smiles,like the most beautiful flower.
或者有更好的语句.........

She is an angel who is liked by everyone at first sight .She has a pretty face and she has two big eyes.But she is very different from other angels,it is because she has only one wing.But as you know,the others has a pair of wings.She is so sad,and belittle herself.She has never spoken to others,even if she has wonderful voice.When an angle tried to speak with her,she always remained dumb.Because she thinks that other angles look down on her,She was used to go about alone.But when she is alone,she always ask to herself sadly:” Why do I have only one wing,why am I different from others,why?”she knows:she can’t fly like others,so she have never tried to fly in the sky.
One day ,she sits on the margin of a lake lonely and enjoys herself.She likes the blue sky,the birds singing,the green trees,the beautiful flowers,and so on.There is a family having a picnic near the lake ,the mother is cooking,the father is fishing,and the little boy is playing with himself.
Suddenly,the angle heard a woman screaming,then she sees the boy falling into the water.The boy makes frenzied efforts in the water.And his parents are very worried,but they all couldn't swim ,and water is so deep that they can’t jump into the lake,or they will be died with the boy.”what can I do?The boy will be died if no one helps him,”the angle think.Then ,she tries to expand her wing.To her surprise,she flies to the boy easily,but not quite so smoothly.She saves the boy.The boy’s parents are very thankful to her for her help.“Are you an angle?You are so nice and goodness of heart.”The boy asks her.”Yes.Thank you for your praise .”
all at once,she was clear about her wings:she can fly even if she has only one wing.Then,the another wing comes out by a miracle .She is so happy,she smiles,like the most beautiful flower.