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假设你是李华,你刚收到你英国网友P的邮件,他在邮件中谈到他大学买车的想法,想征求你的意见
你的建议是1拥有私家车便捷
2,拥有私家车烦恼3驾驶私家车的风险4校园交通便捷
务必原创,谢谢老师
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解题过程:
你好,答疑如下 Dear Peter, I’m delighted to have received your letter asking me for my advice on your plan to buy a new private car as a university student.Here are my suggestions. It is true that the private car is a convenient means of transportation. You can go wherever you like.More importantly,it is up to you when you hit the road. But we must pay heed to its disadvantages. The most annoying is that it will cost more than you have expected . Apart from the high price of the car,more money will be spent on oil and maintenance every day. What's worse,you will risk your life to work. It is reported that hundreds of people lose their lives because of accidents in China.So why not take buses? Many buses pass by your university ,and they are green after all. In my view,you had better not get a car.Not only is it beneficial to you but also to the environment. Best wishes, yours, Lihua 愿你满意,异议来信。