作业帮英语作文评改
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/10/04 11:07:02
以MY Hobbies(我的爱好）为题写一篇短文。要求：语句通顺，书写工整，对你的某个爱好作一下集中介绍。50个单词左右。 提示语：in one's spare time 在业余时间 My Hobbies I like play volleyball.Initial stage, we had volleyball exam.I can't play volleyball soon.Play volleyball is very good,and it's very good healthy.I hope everybody can play volleyball.
解题思路： 语句不够连贯，提示词并未用到，词数不符合要求。具体修改部分请看下面的红体字部分。
解题过程：
My Hobbies
I like playing volleyball in my spare time .At first ,we had a volleyball exam ，but I couldn't play volleyball .So I had to learn to play it .Now I can play it very well .I think playing volleyball is very good, and it's very good for health .I hope everybody can play volleyball.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My Hobbies
I like playing volleyball in my spare time .At first ,we had a volleyball exam ，but I couldn't play volleyball .So I had to learn to play it .Now I can play it very well .I think playing volleyball is very good, and it's very good for health .I hope everybody can play volleyball.
最终答案：略