作业帮有一句英语求职话有点语病,谁来修改下?
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有一句英语求职话有点语病,谁来修改下?
To obtain a position as a technician or stuff engaged in the machine design and manufacturing.
I major in Process Equipment and Control Engineering,have good commanded knowledge of mechanical engineering,chemical engineering,and the control engineering etc.,with an emphasis in the engineering design,technique development,and the management.I offer proficiency of English,well-trained ability to use the computer,excel in the graphics of CAD.
To obtain a position as a technician or stuff engaged in the machine design and manufacturing.
I major in Process Equipment and Control Engineering,have good commanded knowledge of mechanical engineering,chemical engineering,and the control engineering etc.,with an emphasis in the engineering design,technique development,and the management.I offer proficiency of English,well-trained ability to use the computer,excel in the graphics of CAD.
I am interested in a position as a technician or stuff engaged in the machine designing and manufacturing.
I major in Process Equipment and Control Engineering,who have good commanded knowledge of the mechanical and chemical engnieering as well.My knowledge of professions emphasizes the engineering design,technique development,and management.I am confident to offer proficiencies of English as well as well-trained computer skills such as excel in the graphics of CAD.
I major in Process Equipment and Control Engineering,who have good commanded knowledge of the mechanical and chemical engnieering as well.My knowledge of professions emphasizes the engineering design,technique development,and management.I am confident to offer proficiencies of English as well as well-trained computer skills such as excel in the graphics of CAD.
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