作业帮请大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~
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请大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~
To go abroad for further study or as post-graduate students to take a more advanced course of study or looking for work.I consider these questions of each graduating college students are thinking.But what sort of choosing would be more suitable for us?In my opinion,these questions vary from person to person.Because the growth of each person's experience is unique,so their ideas are not the same.If your family well and have enough money for you to study abroad,then go abroad may be a good choice.This can broaden your horizons in a foreign country and you can better understand the word.However,as post-graduate students to take a more advanced course of study are also the choice of many people,because this may help you find a better job.If you think that the knowledge learned in the university has adequate for your future required,then you can consider going to work.
To go abroad for further study or as post-graduate students to take a more advanced course of study or looking for work.I consider these questions of each graduating college students are thinking.But what sort of choosing would be more suitable for us?In my opinion,these questions vary from person to person.Because the growth of each person's experience is unique,so their ideas are not the same.If your family well and have enough money for you to study abroad,then go abroad may be a good choice.This can broaden your horizons in a foreign country and you can better understand the word.However,as post-graduate students to take a more advanced course of study are also the choice of many people,because this may help you find a better job.If you think that the knowledge learned in the university has adequate for your future required,then you can consider going to work.
我看见了一个问题,在美国because不能第一个开头!在because用在之间的时候不要加,（↙）全部都很不错,不过用because要多多练习.