作业帮帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误
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帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误
Li Ming's hometown has changed a lot in the past few years.
In the past.Their living conditions were very bad.They lived in a small low house.They had not TV to watch.Their working tools were farm animals Their school conditions were bad.They studied in an old school.
But now.Their living in a tall bright building.They can play computer games and watch TV in their free times.Their working tools are farm machines.Their are studying in a modern school.
In short,along with chinese devwlopment.Their life will be more and more beautiful.
Li Ming's hometown has changed a lot in the past few years.
In the past.Their living conditions were very bad.They lived in a small low house.They had not TV to watch.Their working tools were farm animals Their school conditions were bad.They studied in an old school.
But now.Their living in a tall bright building.They can play computer games and watch TV in their free times.Their working tools are farm machines.Their are studying in a modern school.
In short,along with chinese devwlopment.Their life will be more and more beautiful.
第二行的bad用poor更好些,用bad也无语法错误
第二行had not 应为didn't have因为had not 是完成时标志,此处用法错误
第五行Their应改为They
第六行time应为单数,此处用法错误
第六行Their应改为They
第七行In short,along with chinese devwlopment.不正确,不知楼主要表达什么
再问： 第七行，随着中国的发展。打错了一个单词 我忽然觉得应该是along with the development of China
再答： 嗯，along with the development of China这样表达正确 还有什么疑问么？
第二行had not 应为didn't have因为had not 是完成时标志,此处用法错误
第五行Their应改为They
第六行time应为单数,此处用法错误
第六行Their应改为They
第七行In short,along with chinese devwlopment.不正确,不知楼主要表达什么
再问： 第七行，随着中国的发展。打错了一个单词 我忽然觉得应该是along with the development of China
再答： 嗯，along with the development of China这样表达正确 还有什么疑问么？