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A Survey on Students' Diet
Recently I did a survey on Students' Diet
.Lin Li whose favorite is sweet food,She says that it can make her happy.Wang Ming whose favorite is the food with high fat,he thinks it is delicious.And Zhang Dan's favorite is fast food,for it's convenient he thinks.Zhao Hui whose favorites are vegetables and fruit,because he believes vegetables and fruit are good to his health.I think only Zhao Hui's is good.Because food with high fat can cause illness easily,sweet food is bad for our teeth,fast food is bad for our health.
According to the survey above,We should choose healthy food instead of anything that we like
A Survey on Students' Diet
Recently I did a survey on Students' Diet
.Lin Li whose favorite is sweet food,She says that it can make her happy.Wang Ming whose favorite is the food with high fat,he thinks it is delicious.And Zhang Dan's favorite is fast food,for it's convenient he thinks.Zhao Hui whose favorites are vegetables and fruit,because he believes vegetables and fruit are good to his health.I think only Zhao Hui's is good.Because food with high fat can cause illness easily,sweet food is bad for our teeth,fast food is bad for our health.
According to the survey above,We should choose healthy food instead of anything that we like
改：
1.for it's convenient he thinks-------
for he believes it convenient
2.vegetables and fruit are good to
( to 改为for)his health.
3.sweet food is bad for our teeth,（加 and) fast food is bad ...逗号不能连接两个分句,要加连词.
1.for it's convenient he thinks-------
for he believes it convenient
2.vegetables and fruit are good to
( to 改为for)his health.
3.sweet food is bad for our teeth,（加 and) fast food is bad ...逗号不能连接两个分句,要加连词.