谁能在线对英文语法纠错啊.

谁能在线对英文语法纠错啊.
Dear Grandpa Grandma:
How are you these days?
It has been half year since we landed Canada.We are going to move into new house at the beginning of 2011 where located in Markham.There is a vast expanse of field in front of our bright and happy house,and the yard is well-design.
We can breathe fresh air everyday here.It is incredible to believe the sky are especially blue and the color of lakes water are almost the same as fascinating landscape.The most important thing I want to mention is that the Canadian life-style is totally different as we were comparing with China.Although you have travelled for several countries of Southeast Asia and touched the many different kinds of customs,you would still have a far cry from what you used to have in your mind.The view of the Toronto is lovely which I am sure you have known that from the picture we send,and the otherwise,the relationships between people are friendly and harmonious.People here lived in a peaceful and comfortable atmosphere.
Before we land Canada,you once opposed that we come here to start our new life.You said“ The winter became the world of ice and snow.It will be very difficult for you to adapt their climatic environment; especially you have never seen the snow before.” But we actually fell in love with the winter with white snow everywhere.Mark love to lying down on the white snow looking the snowflake fluttered down slowly.If you could come to Canada to have a look,certainly you will be shocked by the beautiful scene here.And I bet you will change your mind to agree with daddy’s choice.When you came back to China,you will proud to tell our family and friends that we are having a happy life here.
We warmly hoped that you can come to Canada to visit us,enjoying the fresh air and good natural landscape and having an unforgettable trip.From our new house,we can take a few steps to appreciate the exotic feeling of the small town.If we drive for half an hour to downtown Toronto,there we can experience the prosperous and bustling of a modern city.
It would be the better choice for you to decide to come here in summer,so that we may have a good opportunity to go to travel the east coast of Canada together to see the wonderful seaside.Or we can make another plan to the Banff Glacier National Park to appreciate the century glacier which we have never seen that before.
We sincerely look forward to your visit.
Yours
Sincerely
Granddaughter

改好了,见下文：
Dear Grandpa,Grandma:
How are you these days?
It has been half a year since we settled down in Canada.We are going to move into the new house located in Markham at the beginning of 2011.There is a vast expanse of field in front of our bright and pleasant house,and the yard is well-designed.
We can breathe fresh air everyday here.It is incredible to believe the sky is especially blue and the color of the lake water is almost the same as fascinating landscape.The most important thing I want to mention is that the Canadian life-style is totally different comparing with that in China.Although you have visited several countries in Southeast Asia and learnt many different kinds of customs,you would still have a far cry from what you used to have in your mind.The view of Toronto is lovely,which I am sure you have known from the pictures we send.Otherwise,the relationships between the people here are friendly and harmonious.They live in a peaceful and comfortable atmosphere.
Before we settled down in Canada,you once opposed our idea to come here and start our new life.You said“ It becomes a world of ice and snow in witnter.It will be very difficult for you to adapt to their climatic environment,especially with the snow you
've never seen before.” But we actually fell in love with the winter with white snow everywhere.Mark loves lying down on the white snow watching the snowflake flutter down slowly.If you can come to Canada to have a look,you will certainly be shocked by the beautiful scene here.And I bet you will change your mind and agree with daddy’s choice.When you go back to China,you will be proud to tell our family and friends that we are having a happy life here.
We warmly hoped that you can visit us in Canada and enjoy the fresh air and good natural landscape and have an unforgettable trip.From our new house,we can take a few steps to appreciate the exotic feeling of the small town.If we drive for half an hour to downtown Toronto,there we can experience the prosperousity and bustlingness of a modern city.
It would be better for you to come here in summer,so that we may have a good opportunity to visit the east coast of Canada together to see the wonderful beaches.Or we can make another plan to the Banff Glacier National Park to appreciate the century glacier that we have never seen before.
We sincerely look forward to your visit.
Yours
Sincerely
Granddaughter
另外,中国人与中国人交流,建议最好还是用汉语,对你们都好.