作业帮修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,
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修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,
TO:Bailey
Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.
Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in love with you,but I dare not told you that I like you,because I was very worried about that you would refuse me,so,I thought a large number of ways to close you.Time goes by,I found that i love you more and more deep,but I never express my feeling to you,until we graduate from class 10,but I believe that you know I like you.Today,I want to tell you that you are my oasis in my soul.
I love you so much,I want to marry you in the future if I can give you a fabby life,so,I must fight for my dream.Although I will meet many problems on the way of my dream,but I will give over all problems!
You are my faith,I believe in you forever.
Please be brave!
From:
Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
这句话有问题没
TO:Bailey
Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.
Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in love with you,but I dare not told you that I like you,because I was very worried about that you would refuse me,so,I thought a large number of ways to close you.Time goes by,I found that i love you more and more deep,but I never express my feeling to you,until we graduate from class 10,but I believe that you know I like you.Today,I want to tell you that you are my oasis in my soul.
I love you so much,I want to marry you in the future if I can give you a fabby life,so,I must fight for my dream.Although I will meet many problems on the way of my dream,but I will give over all problems!
You are my faith,I believe in you forever.
Please be brave!
From:
Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
这句话有问题没
Happy birthday!Wow your are 20 years old now,congratulations!by the way,you are getting more and more beautiful!
I still remember three years ago we crossed our paths for the first time at class 10 grade 1 and immediately I fell in love with you.But at that time I was so afraid of being declined that I didn't have the guts to tell you how I felt about you.Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
I love you so much that I want to marry you and give you a steady life.So I must stand and fight for my dreams as a man worthy of your love.Even if there are countless obstacles out there,I will fight to the end.
帮楼主修改了一些语言生硬的地方,成语谚语没用什么,但是基本符合英语的说话方式了.
顺便说一句,我挺喜欢你oasis那句,很煽情哦!
放心,这句话是没有问题的,同时用三种时态是为了达到煽情的效果
I still remember three years ago we crossed our paths for the first time at class 10 grade 1 and immediately I fell in love with you.But at that time I was so afraid of being declined that I didn't have the guts to tell you how I felt about you.Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
I love you so much that I want to marry you and give you a steady life.So I must stand and fight for my dreams as a man worthy of your love.Even if there are countless obstacles out there,I will fight to the end.
帮楼主修改了一些语言生硬的地方,成语谚语没用什么,但是基本符合英语的说话方式了.
顺便说一句,我挺喜欢你oasis那句,很煽情哦!
放心,这句话是没有问题的,同时用三种时态是为了达到煽情的效果
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