sat作文修改,这是我人生第一次掐着表写的,后来一点都没改,就想看看这水平能大概拿多少.我知道很烂.Can any ob

sat作文修改,
这是我人生第一次掐着表写的,后来一点都没改,就想看看这水平能大概拿多少.
我知道很烂.
Can any obstacle or disadvantage be turned into something good?
Everything can be looked at in different ways.An obstacle might prevent a person from something but it might also provide an opportunity that other people do not get.
\x05 When a disadvantage happens to be there and people cannot avoid this certain disadvantage they can adjust their view and use the disadvantage in a benign way.Nick vujicic,an Australian motivational speaker did not have arms and legs when he was born.Obviously,this is an obstacle for him.He even had to learn how to get himself a cup of water.By the age of ten,he still did not give up trying to be involved in the community,and he realized he was not the only person who suffers from without limbs.When he reached seventeen,he realized that his own experience can inspire other people,so he began to give speeches regularly around the world and created his non-profit organization to help other handicapped people.Now,he even has his own books and DVDs published and became one of the most respected in the world.When he was born,no one knows that,as a crippled man,he would become successful in his own way.His parents were desperate and worried about him.Vujicic did not let his disadvantages stop him.He used them and his experiences to inspire other people and created his own success.
Not only physical disabilities can be turned into something good,but also financial crisis during the 1930s in America.The great depression did made many people homeless and unemployed,but it promoted the New Deal,which not only solved the short-term problems but completely changed the national financial and banking system and prevented any future crisis.Roosevelt changed the Great Depression into a chance to completely reform America’s banking system and improved the welfare of the people.
Any obstacles or disadvantages can be turned into something good.Most of the time,obstacles come unprepared and unavoidable,so the only thing people can do is to look at it in different way and try their best to change it into something beneficial to themselves.

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Can any obstacle or disadvantage be turned into something good?
Everything can be looked at in different ways.An obstacle might prevent a person from something,but it might also provide an opportunity that other people do not get.
\x05 When a weakness happens to be there and people cannot avoid this certain disadvantage they can adjust their view and use the disadvantage in a benign way.Nick verdict,an Australian motivational speaker did not have arms and legs when he was born.Obviously,this is an obstacle for him.He even had to learn how to get himself a cup of water.By the age of ten,he still did not give up trying to be involved in the community,and he realized he was not the only person who suffers from without limbs.When he reached seventeen,he realized that his own experience can inspire other people,so he began to give speeches regularly around the world and created his non-profit organization to help further handicapped people.Now,he even has his private books and DVDs published and became one of the most respected in the world.When he was born,no one knew that,as a crippled man,he would become wealthy in his own way.His parents were desperate and worried about him.Volgaic did not let his disadvantages stop him.He used them and his experiences to inspire other people and made his own success.
Not only physical disabilities can be turned into something useful,but also financial crisis during the 1930s in America.The great depression did make many people homeless and unemployed,but it promoted the New Deal,which not only solved the short-term problems but completely changed the domestic financial and banking system and prevented any future crisis.Roosevelt changed the Great Depression into a chance to completely reform America's banking system and improved the welfare of the people.
Any obstacles or disadvantages can be turned into something useful.Most of the time,obstacles come unprepared and unavoidable,so the only thing people can do to be to look at it in a different way and try their best to change it into something beneficial to themselves.
再问： 那。。。这篇文章大概能得几分。。。
再答： 我改得吗
再问： 你改哪里了？为什么我没找到变化。。。
再答： 仔细看
再问： 好吧。。那你这篇大概多少分？大概就好。。。5分还是10分？
再答： 6分