作业帮我写的英语短文,请纠错,看有没有不地道或语法错误,请讲明理由谢谢
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我写的英语短文,请纠错,看有没有不地道或语法错误,请讲明理由谢谢
Love her more than you love yourself
At the age of one ,you were born ,she held you with her arm, you thanked her by weeping the eyes out.
When you were five, she bought you some books; you thanked her by tearing up the books.
In your fifteen birthday party, she dressed you up to it ,.you thanked her by telling she had no taste.
At the age of thirty, she wanted to help you with your work.. you thanked her by saying “it is none of your business”
………
You are each of us ,she is our mother!
After you read all above ,do you feel sorry to your mother, do you think you are not a good son or a nice daughter?
Mother give us so much, however,what actually do we do for our mom?
Maybe you could hardly say a word.
We always do little for our mother, but mother does much for us…
Everyone should cherish each single moment with our mother.
Love her more than you love yourself. Life is meaningless without her…
Love her more than you love yourself
At the age of one ,you were born ,she held you with her arm, you thanked her by weeping the eyes out.
When you were five, she bought you some books; you thanked her by tearing up the books.
In your fifteen birthday party, she dressed you up to it ,.you thanked her by telling she had no taste.
At the age of thirty, she wanted to help you with your work.. you thanked her by saying “it is none of your business”
………
You are each of us ,she is our mother!
After you read all above ,do you feel sorry to your mother, do you think you are not a good son or a nice daughter?
Mother give us so much, however,what actually do we do for our mom?
Maybe you could hardly say a word.
We always do little for our mother, but mother does much for us…
Everyone should cherish each single moment with our mother.
Love her more than you love yourself. Life is meaningless without her…
1.题目直接用love her than love yourself就好··这样才是对称的；
2.第一行中的arm应该用arms;
3.第四行里的in your fifteen birthday party应该改为at your fifteen's birthday party;
4.第四行by telling she had no taste应该是by telling her that she had no taste;(tell后面不能直接跟省略that的从句啊）
5.第九行的you are each of us不是很顺,我想改为"you" are the anyone in us会好一点；
6.第十二行actually放在第二个do后面会好一点；
7.第十五行的each single moment改为every moment好像会好点；
8.第十六行如题than you love yourself改为than love yourself比较好··
大概就这些了···拿不准的我就没说了··
2.第一行中的arm应该用arms;
3.第四行里的in your fifteen birthday party应该改为at your fifteen's birthday party;
4.第四行by telling she had no taste应该是by telling her that she had no taste;(tell后面不能直接跟省略that的从句啊）
5.第九行的you are each of us不是很顺,我想改为"you" are the anyone in us会好一点；
6.第十二行actually放在第二个do后面会好一点；
7.第十五行的each single moment改为every moment好像会好点；
8.第十六行如题than you love yourself改为than love yourself比较好··
大概就这些了···拿不准的我就没说了··
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