作业帮托福口语task1求大神批改啊~
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托福口语task1求大神批改啊~
希望能纠正我的那些中式英语.还有内容上给点建议~
2013-020-2NA task1
Which following way of education do you support most?Through books,through communication withinthe community,or travelling around the world.Please give specific reasons andexamples.
I would like to choose the books.First,when it comesto education,the majority of people think of books first.As a kind of human'sconventional implement for thousands of years,books teach us since we areinfants.Even after you get doctoraldegree,you can't leave books when you acquire new knowledge.Second,it's veryconvenient to find a book and you can read it anytime and anywhere.Finally,most of the knowledge you want to learn has been recorded in books.And it'seasy for you to find the right book you want to read.
希望能纠正我的那些中式英语.还有内容上给点建议~
2013-020-2NA task1
Which following way of education do you support most?Through books,through communication withinthe community,or travelling around the world.Please give specific reasons andexamples.
I would like to choose the books.First,when it comesto education,the majority of people think of books first.As a kind of human'sconventional implement for thousands of years,books teach us since we areinfants.Even after you get doctoraldegree,you can't leave books when you acquire new knowledge.Second,it's veryconvenient to find a book and you can read it anytime and anywhere.Finally,most of the knowledge you want to learn has been recorded in books.And it'seasy for you to find the right book you want to read.
Among the three approaches,I perfer books most.To begin wiith,when it comes to education,the first thing that occurs to me is the book.As the most traditional medium for human knowledge to pass on,the comic books lead us to the world of imagination since we are young.Even after you get a doctor degree,you can't leave heavy dictionaries when you need something new and accurate.What's more,it's very convenient to find a book whearever you are and whenever you need.Finally,since most of the knowledge we pursuit has been recorded in books by formal sages,it'seasy for you just to pick up the right book and enjoy reading.
我只是在你的基础上改了个大概,内容还可以更丰富,比如读书的好处有丰富、了解世界和不同时代的人生、方便、培养自学能力等等,还可以列举下名著,从古代的荷马史诗到现代的达芬奇密码.长度还要看你语速,背的时候只记关键词就行.口语最虐了,考场上也会紧张,加油!
再问： 哇感觉瞬间高大上了许多！！谢谢学姐！
再答： 木有啦，其实口语发音清晰、不紧张最重要，加油~
我只是在你的基础上改了个大概,内容还可以更丰富,比如读书的好处有丰富、了解世界和不同时代的人生、方便、培养自学能力等等,还可以列举下名著,从古代的荷马史诗到现代的达芬奇密码.长度还要看你语速,背的时候只记关键词就行.口语最虐了,考场上也会紧张,加油!
再问： 哇感觉瞬间高大上了许多！！谢谢学姐！
再答： 木有啦，其实口语发音清晰、不紧张最重要，加油~