作业帮请高手帮我改下语法问题～～
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请高手帮我改下语法问题～～
唉,我们一个朋友给女友写的,非让我帮着翻译,我写了半天,肯定有好多问题,请大家帮我改一改,谢谢!
The Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I was can’t slept last night.
I have never calm down. Somebody told me, if you love someone that the most happiness was your lover will happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays to you and to bear the anguish again and again? No , Is it should not be selfish to me?
Last night she told me that her gratitude more than her love, for me. I was very grieved. A person who I love her at pains. Once hurt also enough? Why hurt me again and again? If you know we are together no result ,why did you come back again? You know I was so happy when you told me get married with me.
Although only a short period of time to come back, I tried change all my life in your way. But you leave me again when the boy com back. Oh! Why did you?!
唉,我们一个朋友给女友写的,非让我帮着翻译,我写了半天,肯定有好多问题,请大家帮我改一改,谢谢!
The Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I was can’t slept last night.
I have never calm down. Somebody told me, if you love someone that the most happiness was your lover will happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays to you and to bear the anguish again and again? No , Is it should not be selfish to me?
Last night she told me that her gratitude more than her love, for me. I was very grieved. A person who I love her at pains. Once hurt also enough? Why hurt me again and again? If you know we are together no result ,why did you come back again? You know I was so happy when you told me get married with me.
Although only a short period of time to come back, I tried change all my life in your way. But you leave me again when the boy com back. Oh! Why did you?!
改后：The Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I couldn't sleep last night.
I have never been calm down. Somebody told me, if you loved someone, the biggest happiness was that your lover would happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays you but you bear the anguish again and again? No , that is too selfish.
Last night she told me that she gratitude more than she love me. I was very grieved. A person who I love at pains. Once again hurt me totally? Why hurt me again and again? If you know there is no reault between us,why did you come back again? You knew I was so happy when you told me to get married .
Although only a short period of time, I have been changing all my life in your way. But you leave me alone again when the boy come back. Oh! Why did you?!
I have never been calm down. Somebody told me, if you loved someone, the biggest happiness was that your lover would happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays you but you bear the anguish again and again? No , that is too selfish.
Last night she told me that she gratitude more than she love me. I was very grieved. A person who I love at pains. Once again hurt me totally? Why hurt me again and again? If you know there is no reault between us,why did you come back again? You knew I was so happy when you told me to get married .
Although only a short period of time, I have been changing all my life in your way. But you leave me alone again when the boy come back. Oh! Why did you?!