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雅思第一次考其他OK,作文5.5,短时间想提高到6.5

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雅思第一次考其他OK,作文5.5,短时间想提高到6.5
请前辈具体讲讲作文提高的方法,包括大作文和小作文.
这个容易~我觉得看上面有个人说的那个对~就一个字,背~但是我来告诉你具体点的.
如果你是A类的话~
小作文极其简单送分,就是各种趋势各种变化的那几组词~记下来套这写就行了~给你简单整理一些:
1、趋势类词汇
上升动词类: increase, go up, rise up, grow up, jump up, surge, shoot up, keep an upward tendency
下降动词类: decrease, go down, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency
波动动词类: fluctuate
持平动词类: remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant
修饰动词的副词: slightly 轻微地, slowly 缓慢地, gradually 逐渐地, steadily 稳定地, rapidly 迅速地, moderately 温和地, 轻微地, significantly 明显地, sharply 明显地, dramatically急剧地, drastically 急剧地
上升名词类: increase, rise, growth, jump, surge
下降名词类: decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动名词类: fluctuation
修饰名词的形容词: slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic
2、极值类词汇和表达
最高点: reach the peak/top/highest point
Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点: reach the bottom/lowest point
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占的最多: occupy/make up/take up/account for the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占的最少: occupy/make up/take up/account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
3、倍数的表达方式
Double 是两倍/大一倍
Increase/decrease three times 增长/减少了三倍
4、大约的表达方式
About/around + 数字
数字 + or so
Approximately + 数字
5、常用的小作文的趋势句式表达
句式一: 变化主体/图画中主体+趋势动词+副词+时间区间
Eg: The number of aged people over 65 increased significantly from 1940-2000.
The number of aged people over 65 dropped slightly from 1960-1980.
The number of aged people over 65 fluctuated between 1 million and 1.2 million from 1940-1950.
The number of aged people over 65 remained stable from 1930-1940.
句式二: There be + 形容词 + 表示趋势的名词 + in+ 变化的主体+ 时间区间
Eg: There was an significant increase in the number of aged people over 65 from 1940-2000.
There was a slight decline in the number of aged people over 65 from 1960-1980.
There was a fluctuation between 1 million and 1.2 million from 1940-1950.
大作文就比较复杂了~不过你能考5.5,说明你基本词汇还是有一些的~所以你现在平时要多注意关注一些你常用的低级词汇找一些能替换的高级词汇~你自己整理一下~比如你可能老说Important,就可以换成vital呀什么的~还有你说very good,可以换成excellent呀什么的,这是词汇上的.
再一个就是句式上面~你去找一些高级句式,不需要懂他是多么复杂的语法~因为我个人不善语法~所以我曾经是这么做的~就分析出来这个句子是什么格式~看些好文章挑一些感觉很牛逼的长难句~分析出来其中的连接词和主要关键词的格式~然后记下来,以后遇到文章就可以往里套.
希望能帮到你~