英语错的地方改一下In my opinion,english is very related with all of p

英语错的地方改一下
In my opinion,english is very related with all of people's future.English became an official language in this world.It is not the only reason that english is an official language so we have to learn about it,but also we need to learn some other country's developed fields about information,technology and culture.All the more,we could communicate and swap with our country's prowess to social world for liberty.It is very important that we have to learn english easily,interestingly and fully from the child.It is because of we can acquire languages more easily when we learn it from the child.So we could speak fluently,listen and write easily for the first time.
It is very uncomfortable to communicate with each other without english.And we've already know that everywhere using in english.No matter where,they all have english explanations in public place.And when we finding employment,they need high score of english.There are very much of differences between someone who can speak and someone who can't speak english.
We training english from the elementary education.Which means,english is very important for our life.We Koreans even shows that more and more students choosing early study abroad,and so do I.
Here are some examples about importance of english.
First,english is one of the most important thing that should be required when you get a job what you want.So if you don't have any difficulty in understanding english,you will get lots of informations from the internet or magazine...ect.Again,you are ahead of others at social life when you are good at english.
Lastly,when we go to abroad,you will get to know that many people use the english.They don't have to worry about the panic situation when they are alone,because they can ask others help.
In conclusion,learning english is that you become one of the member in the globalized world.

In my opinion,english is highly related with people's future.English is becaming an official language in this world.But it is not the only reason that we have to learn about it.We need to learn other country's expirence of advanced fields ,technology and culture.And also we could communicate and swap with our country's prowess to social world for liberty.Besides ,it is very important that we have to learn english easily,interestingly and fully from the child.That because we can acquire languages more easily when we are child.In that case we could speak fluently,listen and write easily for the first time.
It is uncomfortable to communicate with each other without english.And we've already know that everywhere is useing english.Everywhere have English explanations.And when we want to get a better job,we need high score of english.There are very much of differences between someone who can speak and someone who can't .
We training english from the elementary education.Which means,english is very important for our life.We Koreans even shows that more and more students choosing early study abroad,and so do I.
Here are some examples about importance of english.
First,english is one of the most important ability which should be required when you get a job what you want.So if you don't have any difficulty in understanding english,you will get lots of informations from the internet or magazine...ect.Again,you are ahead of others at social life when you are good at english.
Lastly,when we go to abroad,you will get to know that many people use the english.They don't have to worry about the panic situation when they are alone,because they can ask for other's help.
In conclusion,learning english is that you become one of the member in the globalized world.