高中英语作文喜欢音乐的人越来越多,音乐已经成为人们生活中必不可少的一部分.受英语报社的委托,你最近对高中生何时听音乐、为

高中英语作文
喜欢音乐的人越来越多,音乐已经成为人们生活中必不可少的一部分.受英语报社的委托,你最近对高中生何时听音乐、为什么听音乐做了调查,调查情况如下表：
When Why
in the morning wake up
in the evening fall asleep
we are sad cheer up
we are tired relax
根据调查结论,用英语写一篇100-120词的短文.
注意：可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使文章连贯.
快喽 咱不差分 别蒙我就行

with the development of the media technology,more and more people are getting interested in music.Music has become one of the necessary part of the people's life.Being commissioned by the English newspaper press,I did a survey among the senior students,about when and why do they listen to the music.
According to the survey,most students would like to listen to the music in 4 situations.Firstly,they listen to the music in the morning to help them to get awake.At this time,they always chose some lively tunes.Secondly,they may enjoy the music at night.This time they prefer to chose some light music so that it can help them fall asleep.
Thirdly,they like to listen to some music when they are sad,because some happy tunes can cheer them up.At last,when they are tired,they fell like listening to the music,too.Because music can make them feel relaxed.
We can see from the above that music can really help people.And students always enjoy music when they need it.
那个.对于焰小朋友对我答案的修改,我想说一下.
1.be interested in才是正解 insteresting是令人感兴趣的
2.in the space of music 我不知道你想表达什么 如果是表达领域,请用field
3.你为什么要把help sb do/to do 改成make?而就我所知,make sb后加do而不是doing
4.很明显陈述调查结果时你不该分段,还是你有什么特殊原因需要把thirdly另起一段?