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Growing pains and gains There are always pains and gains in our growth. As we grow bigger, we can meet different kinds of people and try to make friends with them. It’s also enjoyable for us to learn more things and gain more experience. But every coin has two sides. We have to take more responsibility as we grow up, which sometimes make us tired. Growing up also means leaving the past behind. its painful because we have sweet memories. But we must look forward because we cannot avoid growing. What we can do is to accept the pains and gains growth bring and have a positive altitude.
老师,这是我写的作文,想请问1、内容是否符合符合题目要求 2 语法是否正确 3、是否存在 其他问题 4、改进方法 。谢谢
解题思路: 首先根据题目要求确定从几方面书写,然后有条理地书写
解题过程:
同学你好,仔细看了你的作文。总体来说,写的不错。基本没有语法错误,只是个别地方需要稍作改动。
倒数第3句应为:It's painful because we have sweet memories.
最后一句应为:What we can do is to accept the pains and gains which growth brings us and have a positive altitude .
为你提供一篇范文,供参考。
Such a movie called “Growing Pains” seems full of knowledge and experience. So it does because all of us have growing pains and also growing gains in our lives.
Growing up is not a very enjoyable time. It means I have to work hard in studying and in family. There’s always so much homework given by teachers and so many arguments between the parents and me. The time is fair, but it seems it gives pains three quarters and only one quarter to gains.
But gains give me power and confidence. Successes and friendship make me happy and enjoyable. We played with snow in the winter that seldom snows, we flew kites in the night that usually belongs to homework, we ate several ice creams that almost made us cold. We picked up leaven that no longer high up!
Although pains are always more than gains, I believe both of them make my life more colorful.