作业帮我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误
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我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail,Later please use this email writing to me .If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
现在是改过的，
Dear badradio,(sorry，I forgot your real name,so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please writing to me later.If you want to better understand China,email me，never mind.
Keep in touch，I am looking forward to your early reply.
Your sincerely
Abbey
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail,Later please use this email writing to me .If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
现在是改过的，
Dear badradio,(sorry，I forgot your real name,so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please writing to me later.If you want to better understand China,email me，never mind.
Keep in touch，I am looking forward to your early reply.
Your sincerely
Abbey
顶一下,你写的挺好的.只有很小的错误.下面是帮你改过的.
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please use this email from now on.If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
再问： 格式上能否准确的写一下【落款什么的】
再答： ........... ........... Your friend, Abby
再问： 标题写成什么 我现在有一个“my new E-mail"合适吗，能改一下么
再答： 可以啊。这种社交邮件，不必要太紧张太正式。另外，如果是长时间没有联系，可以直接用Hello
再问： 看看补充问题，我改过的，还有问题么
再答： 1) writing to me 改成 write me. 给我写信是write me, 不是 writing to me. 2) 把never mind 删掉. 这个never mind 是与别人说法不耐烦的时候，或是不想过多解释的时候用的。
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please use this email from now on.If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
再问： 格式上能否准确的写一下【落款什么的】
再答： ........... ........... Your friend, Abby
再问： 标题写成什么 我现在有一个“my new E-mail"合适吗，能改一下么
再答： 可以啊。这种社交邮件，不必要太紧张太正式。另外，如果是长时间没有联系，可以直接用Hello
再问： 看看补充问题，我改过的，还有问题么
再答： 1) writing to me 改成 write me. 给我写信是write me, 不是 writing to me. 2) 把never mind 删掉. 这个never mind 是与别人说法不耐烦的时候，或是不想过多解释的时候用的。