这篇文章的语法如何修改?

这篇文章的语法如何修改?
（旁白）Friend ship is Warming glorious and fascinating.
（Lisa and Nava 见面）Lisa:What best day What eat for lunch?Nava:How about noodles?Lisa：That sounds good!How about go to upstair?Lisa:Let’s go!
（旁白）But some time friend have smell divergence
Lisa:Nava I said it absolute clearly ,why not you do it on time?
Nava:Your so ridiculous,if you were I you can do it on once day?
Lisa:Alright I can do it profit!
Nava:Your super women I can not compare with you ,I don’t what to say anything,I do not what see you aging!
Lisa:No one care you ,your stupid girl
(Alice 见到Lisa ):hi Lisa ,I see you is after month ,Where is Nava ,I hardly remember she appearance.
Lisa:How is Nava?I don not remember have this thins .
Alice:What’s happen with you?Your ever best friend!Can I help you?
Lisa:I ask her to editing some thins,but she doesn’t do it on time.
Alice:You don’t know editing is sheer difficult ,you shouldn’t anger with her.Just turn the rode you can realize editing without that easy.
(然后又去见Nava):Nava,hear of I you anger with Lisa?She shouldn’t shout with you.But you can’t said you don’t see her aging
(The other day Lisa 去跟Nava 道歉)Lisa:I’m so sorry ,I tray to editing this days but it don’t work Nava:I’m sorry too,I shouldn’t said I never what to see you,because I what you other day!
(俩个人抱在一起)（旁白）：Friendship Is staunch and fragile at the same time; we should protect we are friend ship ,more empathy,you can understand what your friend expend for your friendship!

Warming glorious ------- glorious Warming
What best day !------------What a best day !
What eat for lunch? -------------What eating for lunch?
But some time friend have smell divergence-----------But sometimes friendship(friends) have smell divergence
Nava I said it absolute clearly ,why not you do it on time?------------Nava I think it 's absolute clearly ,why didn't you do it on time?
Your so ridiculous------------You are so ridiculous
I don’t what to say anything, I do not what see you aging!------------I don’t want to say anything, I do not want see you again.
What’s happen with you--------- What happend with yours.
I ask her to editing some thins, but she doesn’t do it on time.---------- I ask her to edit some things, but she didn't do it on time.