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请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,
Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.
Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the example of helping others without asking their rewards.
I think the spirit of Lei Feng should be learned and practiced especially in modern times because there are so many unpleasant examples which is against the spirit.For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was run time and time again but nobody even want to offer help.I think this is the disaster of human’s character.
As we know,helping others is a kind of virtue which can make the world better and better.So I think we should not only learn from the spirit of Lei Feng but also practise it in our daily life.
Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.
Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the example of helping others without asking their rewards.
I think the spirit of Lei Feng should be learned and practiced especially in modern times because there are so many unpleasant examples which is against the spirit.For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was run time and time again but nobody even want to offer help.I think this is the disaster of human’s character.
As we know,helping others is a kind of virtue which can make the world better and better.So I think we should not only learn from the spirit of Lei Feng but also practise it in our daily life.
1,is AN example of helping others without asking their rewards.
2,unpleasant examples which ARE against the spirit
3,For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was runING time and time again but nobody even wantED to help.
4,As we knowN
以上大写为改正的；
整个文章中中文痕迹太重,少用BUT Because I THINK之类的话,都是中文思维.
2,unpleasant examples which ARE against the spirit
3,For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was runING time and time again but nobody even wantED to help.
4,As we knowN
以上大写为改正的；
整个文章中中文痕迹太重,少用BUT Because I THINK之类的话,都是中文思维.
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