英语改错Wang Dan,a quiet girl is one that you can make friends.I

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英语改错
Wang Dan,a quiet girl is one that you can make friends.I got to know her three years before ,when she was moved to the city with her parents .I still remember the afternoon that I frist mer her.She was working in a shoe shop where I was a regularly customer.We than began to talk and I learned that we all studied in the same school.She took a part-time job in her spare time,hoped to be independent.Wang Dan gives me so much sunshines and makes me laugh so many.I have many friends here in the city,and never have I had a friend like her.

1.one -- the one (先行词得特指哦,所以要加定冠词the)
2.make friends -- 改为make friends with （make friends with sb跟某人交朋友,这边的sb是wangdan,也就是先行词the one,所以一定要有介词with）
3.before ---改为ago,因为before多用于完成时态,只有ago才能用于一般过去时
4.was moved -- 去掉was,直接改为moved,因为move是不及物动词,不能用于被动语态,直接是,搬到什么地方move to ---
5.remember--改为remembered,前后时态一致,都应该是过去时态
6.the afternoon that -- 改that为when,when= in which (in the afternoon,显然少掉了介词)
7.than--改为then,然后
8.we all - 改all为both,两个人都用Both
9.hoped--改为hoping,因为Hope跟she是一个主动关系,这边用到的是非谓语动词,表原因
10.sunshines --改为sunshine,它为不可数名词,同时so much修饰动词或者不可数名词
11.so many--改为so much,so many只能修饰可数名词复数,不能修饰动词
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can i have a look of that one?改错英语翻译I can make you dance if you want me toI can make you dan I can help to make you happier英语改错 Can I make friends with you? can i make friends with you I’m so glad that I can make friends with you.后面为什么是宾语从句? as you can see that she is a good girl 高三英语短文改错:Making friends is one of the greatest pleasure that i can accept that you don't want to make friends with i dream i can make a lot of friends that love english study I tell you that she is a good girl that she is a good girl 是 Who is the girl you want to make friends with?