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英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a

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英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a
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I am a senior student and I have a lot of homework to do everyday.I feel my burden is so heavy but in order to my future i have to study hard,
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没有senior student这么一说 ,一般senior high school student
everyday直接删掉 .天 你的问题太多了.
主要是太chinglish
I AM A STUDENT IN SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL .I FEEL EXHAUSTED BECAUSE OF THE BURDEN OF HOMEWORK ,BUT I HAVE TO STUDY HARD FOR FUTURE LIFE.
burden本身就有沉重 不要再加heavy 语义重复
in order to指的是干了某事是为了 I RUNNING EVERY DAY IN ORDER TO KEEP FIT.
句式重复啰嗦