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帮我看看这篇作文文法有没有问题
English 1 Get to Know Yourself Better!
My name is law hau chung,Nickname is max.my birthday is November 20,Every day I go to school at 7 pm.my favorite color is green.but most do not like is the black.my favourite ice-cream is vanilla.Free time most like to play games,read books,Internet.My bedside is the Brothers Grimm*s Fairy Tales.Good at business,Putonghua,Computer.I'm afraid to swim.The most interesting thing that I forgot to pay for car.My room is the best computer items.Most do not like to eat pork.I travel the farthest place in Japan.I do not like housework is the best dishwasher.I fear the film is Insidious.If animals can do,I would choose to do bird,because the freedom to fly.I would like to visit the United States,because too much.i wish i could is Li Ka-shing,Because the money.
English 1 Get to Know Yourself Better!
My name is law hau chung,Nickname is max.my birthday is November 20,Every day I go to school at 7 pm.my favorite color is green.but most do not like is the black.my favourite ice-cream is vanilla.Free time most like to play games,read books,Internet.My bedside is the Brothers Grimm*s Fairy Tales.Good at business,Putonghua,Computer.I'm afraid to swim.The most interesting thing that I forgot to pay for car.My room is the best computer items.Most do not like to eat pork.I travel the farthest place in Japan.I do not like housework is the best dishwasher.I fear the film is Insidious.If animals can do,I would choose to do bird,because the freedom to fly.I would like to visit the United States,because too much.i wish i could is Li Ka-shing,Because the money.
English 1 Get to Know Yourself Better!
My name is Law Hau Cchung, and my nickname is Max. my birthday is on November 20.
Every day I go to school at 7 pm. My favorite color is green and I don't like black the most. My favourite ice-cream is vanilla flavor. In my free time, I always play games, read books and surf on Internet. On my bedside, I put a book The Brothers Grimm*s Fairy Tales, I read it every evening before going to sleep. I'm good at business, Mandarian and Computer. I'm afraid to swim. 后面的更加文不达意,根本没法了解楼主想表达什么,更无从修改.一开始以为是初中生作文,到后面完全糊涂了.还不如把中文拿来让人译呢.崩溃了.
My name is Law Hau Cchung, and my nickname is Max. my birthday is on November 20.
Every day I go to school at 7 pm. My favorite color is green and I don't like black the most. My favourite ice-cream is vanilla flavor. In my free time, I always play games, read books and surf on Internet. On my bedside, I put a book The Brothers Grimm*s Fairy Tales, I read it every evening before going to sleep. I'm good at business, Mandarian and Computer. I'm afraid to swim. 后面的更加文不达意,根本没法了解楼主想表达什么,更无从修改.一开始以为是初中生作文,到后面完全糊涂了.还不如把中文拿来让人译呢.崩溃了.