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帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法错误
Our beloved teacher,you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts.The love and care you have given me will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.I still remember the day during the military training.My anger to caused you trouble.I still remember the hand which was poweful and held me tightly.It's you my dear teacher.And I still feel sorry about that.Sometimes I may get impatient.because I am too hurry to control my emotions.Please don't take it to heart.I can image what a good teacher you are.But I can't imagehow beautiful your heart be.On teacher's day approaching,I want to send you the most sincere best wishes.I wish you work smoothly.
present（呈上）
Our beloved teacher,you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts.The love and care you have given me will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.I still remember the day during the military training.My anger to caused you trouble.I still remember the hand which was poweful and held me tightly.It's you my dear teacher.And I still feel sorry about that.Sometimes I may get impatient.because I am too hurry to control my emotions.Please don't take it to heart.I can image what a good teacher you are.But I can't imagehow beautiful your heart be.On teacher's day approaching,I want to send you the most sincere best wishes.I wish you work smoothly.
present（呈上）
亲爱的老师,您就象那春天的细雨,滋润着我们的心田.你的爱和关怀给了我将鼓励我们要经历一个漫长而艰苦的旅程.我仍然记得那一天在军事训练.我的愤怒造成你的麻烦不断.我仍然记得poweful伸出,紧紧地抱着我.这是你我亲爱的老师.和我仍然感到抱歉.有时我可能会不耐烦.因为我太急于控制我的情绪.请别往心里去.我可以想象你是一个好老师.但是我不能imagehow美丽你的心.在教师节来临之际,我想给你最真挚的祝福.我希望你工作顺利.
（字母的就是错的,望采纳啊~）
再问： 你不会用的百度翻译吧
再答： 你说什么，不明白你的意思？
再问： 我觉得你翻译的怪哦，如果错的怎么改呢
再答： 我不知道你错的地方是什么意思，我都不知道，你把中文发给我
（字母的就是错的,望采纳啊~）
再问： 你不会用的百度翻译吧
再答： 你说什么，不明白你的意思？
再问： 我觉得你翻译的怪哦，如果错的怎么改呢
再答： 我不知道你错的地方是什么意思，我都不知道，你把中文发给我