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英语作文Dear sisterI'm so happy to hear this information that yo

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英语作文
Dear sister
I'm so happy to hear this information that you will return to home these days.
I haven't written in return fast because I was so busy,I prepared for examination all weed,I just finished the exam before 4 hours,I really want to take a rest.
I hope you can tell me some funny events and send some photos about your life.
OK,I'm so tired,I'm going to sleep.I will make efforts to master English.
Take good care of yourself in the year ahead.
Yours
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帮忙改改这篇文章.
eturn to home 是不是说回家?用不着go home 要好些
I haven't written in return fast 这句改成I didn't return your letter on time (及时)要好些
all weed 是不是这整个星期呢,all the week
before 4 hours,应该是4 hours befor
take a rest.应该也行,不过一般说have a rest
some funny events 可以改成something funny.and send some photos (+to me) about---show your life.
OK,I'm so tired,I'm going to sleep.I will make efforts to master English.
Take good care of yourself in the year ahead.
基本上写得很好啦,我帮你改了改,只是建议