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请老师帮我批改英语作文，看看是否存在语法上错误，谢谢。 Last Sunday，I with my family went to the beach on vacation. The sun shined.The weather was very great. What a nice day to go on a vacation! I swam in the sea. The sea was cool. It helped me to keep hot away. My sister and my mother sat at the grassland to enjoy their lunch. The food was very delicious. Where was my father? Oh, he lay on the chair and enjoyed the sun shine. How relaxed he is! I think we were happy and relaxed on the beach. We forgot our troubles and unhappiness!
解题思路： 短文表述清楚，句子通顺，而且无语法错误
解题过程：
Last Sunday，I went to the beach on vacation with my family . The sun shined.The weather was very great(这两句的意思是一样的，可以只用一句). What a nice day to go on a vacation! I swam in the sea. The water was cool. It helped me to keep cool（原来的HOT是形容词） . My sister and my mother sat on the grassland to enjoy their lunch. The food was very delicious. Where was my father? Oh, he was lying on the chair and enjoyed the sunshine. How relaxed he is! I think we were happy and relaxed on the beach.
We forgot our troubles and unhappiness!
这篇文章基本上没有语法错误，一般过去时运用的相当正确，可见你已经注意到了。总休来说这篇短文表述清楚，句子通顺，而且无语法错误，是一篇相当不错的英语作文。只在个别地方的用词上有些不符合习惯用法，但不是语法不对。
如对解答还有疑问，可在答案下方的【添加讨论】中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。感谢你的配合！祝你学习进步，生活愉快！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Last Sunday，I went to the beach on vacation with my family . The sun shined.The weather was very great(这两句的意思是一样的，可以只用一句). What a nice day to go on a vacation! I swam in the sea. The water was cool. It helped me to keep cool（原来的HOT是形容词） . My sister and my mother sat on the grassland to enjoy their lunch. The food was very delicious. Where was my father? Oh, he was lying on the chair and enjoyed the sunshine. How relaxed he is! I think we were happy and relaxed on the beach.
We forgot our troubles and unhappiness!
这篇文章基本上没有语法错误，一般过去时运用的相当正确，可见你已经注意到了。总休来说这篇短文表述清楚，句子通顺，而且无语法错误，是一篇相当不错的英语作文。只在个别地方的用词上有些不符合习惯用法，但不是语法不对。
如对解答还有疑问，可在答案下方的【添加讨论】中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。感谢你的配合！祝你学习进步，生活愉快！
最终答案：略