请给这篇短文改错,一共有十处错
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请给这篇短文改错,一共有十处错
The World Trade Center in New York city burned in the morning of September 11st,2001 after the twin 110-storey towers were hit by two hijacked planes crashing into them.Both towers felt an hour after the attack.Pedestrians nearby ran for their life as one of the twin tower collapsed directly behind them.The third hijacked plane crash at the Pentagon in Washington.The building of US Defence Department seriously damaged.Smoke was seen in the US Capital at the back.Latestreport says what 276 people are proved daed and 6 453 missing.
The World Trade Center in New York city burned in the morning of September 11st,2001 after the twin 110-storey towers were hit by two hijacked planes crashing into them.Both towers felt an hour after the attack.Pedestrians nearby ran for their life as one of the twin tower collapsed directly behind them.The third hijacked plane crash at the Pentagon in Washington.The building of US Defence Department seriously damaged.Smoke was seen in the US Capital at the back.Latestreport says what 276 people are proved daed and 6 453 missing.
1.in the morning 改为on the morning 2.after the winter改为删去the 3.在110-storey前面加the 4.felt改为fell 5life 改为lives 6.one of the twin tower 改为复数one of the twin towers 7.crash改为crashed 8.seriously前面加was 9.what改为that 10.are proved 改为删掉proved,11.daed应该改为dead ,是你打印错误吧.希望我能帮得了你.