作业帮一篇关于Avril的短文,请大家帮我看看有无语法错误
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一篇关于Avril的短文,请大家帮我看看有无语法错误
Avril Lavigne is the girl who has millions of fans around the world since she was just 17.
Avril is the most popular Rock singer because she is really special and amazing.
When she was 16,she gave up the school working to run to New York alone to find the chance if she can sing. She knows that she will be hot. Actually she did it!
Her every album is too much hot and teenagers are loving her in crazy. So she can hold the tour every year in so much cities.
People like Avril Lavigne cause she's the one who is not the same with others. Her music,her character,her clothing and laughing all are special and fabulous.
Avril Lavigne is the girl who has millions of fans around the world since she was just 17.
Avril is the most popular Rock singer because she is really special and amazing.
When she was 16,she gave up the school working to run to New York alone to find the chance if she can sing. She knows that she will be hot. Actually she did it!
Her every album is too much hot and teenagers are loving her in crazy. So she can hold the tour every year in so much cities.
People like Avril Lavigne cause she's the one who is not the same with others. Her music,her character,her clothing and laughing all are special and fabulous.
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再问： 还有其他的吗？
再答： to run 改成running knows改成knew her everyalbum 改成each of her albums 后面的and不恰当 用so that好点吧 are loving 也要用一般现在时
再问： 还有其他的吗？
再答： to run 改成running knows改成knew her everyalbum 改成each of her albums 后面的and不恰当 用so that好点吧 are loving 也要用一般现在时