作业帮请帮我看看这一段英文有无语法错误.
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请帮我看看这一段英文有无语法错误.
我己经没有财富值了,如果错误的话,请写正确答案.
Computer is one of the essential things,we can use the computer to do many things,such as doing homework,send e-mail,computer is convenient,welcome by the people,but the computer also has disadvantage.
我己经没有财富值了,如果错误的话,请写正确答案.
Computer is one of the essential things,we can use the computer to do many things,such as doing homework,send e-mail,computer is convenient,welcome by the people,but the computer also has disadvantage.
The computer is one of the most essential things. We can use computers to do a lot, such as doing homework ,sending emails. Computers are very conveniet to use and welcomed by people, but they also have disadvantages.
对比一下吧.
再问： 是不是对的?
再答： 我都帮你把语法改了你对比一下不同之处。不过如果是写作的话，其实还是有更好的表达方式。你用的句式普遍比较简单，而且突出逻辑关系的关联词比较少，如果有时间的话，不妨改进一下。
对比一下吧.
再问： 是不是对的?
再答： 我都帮你把语法改了你对比一下不同之处。不过如果是写作的话，其实还是有更好的表达方式。你用的句式普遍比较简单，而且突出逻辑关系的关联词比较少，如果有时间的话，不妨改进一下。