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I was a high school student then,from low income family.So I have to work to support my family.My first one job was to clean
the tables in a small restaurant.I still remember going there carly and felt anxious about the new world.I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job .At night,I
was sometimes very tired to do my homework.And I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.and that knoledges could change my life.So what I learned from the job,in a
hard way,was much more important as what I earned.
I was a high school student then,from low income family.So I have to work to support my family.My first one job was to clean
the tables in a small restaurant.I still remember going there carly and felt anxious about the new world.I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job .At night,I
was sometimes very tired to do my homework.And I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.and that knoledges could change my life.So what I learned from the job,in a
hard way,was much more important as what I earned.
1.“我来自一个家庭”,由翻译可知,在low的前面加a;
2.把I have to work的have改成had,全文时态为一般过去时;
3.删掉one,first和one语义重复;
4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样,做remember的宾语,要用动名词的形式;
5.把harder改成hard,原句没有比较的意味,所以用原形;
6.把very tired的very改成too,因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要,所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”;
7.把understand that的that改成it,只有it可以做形式宾语,真正的宾语为to earn money;
8.knowledges改成knowledge,knowledge是抽象名词,不可数;
9.把as改成than,more...than...表示比较.
2.把I have to work的have改成had,全文时态为一般过去时;
3.删掉one,first和one语义重复;
4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样,做remember的宾语,要用动名词的形式;
5.把harder改成hard,原句没有比较的意味,所以用原形;
6.把very tired的very改成too,因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要,所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”;
7.把understand that的that改成it,只有it可以做形式宾语,真正的宾语为to earn money;
8.knowledges改成knowledge,knowledge是抽象名词,不可数;
9.把as改成than,more...than...表示比较.
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