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谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,
Everyone has an admire historical figure?I also have,she is the person I admire most,Helen Keller.I believe you have seen (if gave me three days light).This is the famous book which moved the wold,be from the blind and deaf mutilated girl keller
Helen Keller was born in America,south.Nineteen months old,because a bad illness,making her since then lost eyesight and hearing.Eight,Helen's mother for her to find a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan,and enter the perkins copyright learning.At age 16,Helen into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history,German,Latin,mathematics and many literary classics.Four years after that,she goes into Harvard University,began to try writing.After graduation from the university,Helen heart concentrated in pushing the blind care the social movement,such as publishing blind journals,established security blind cell committee,making the blind by society heart finally value.In 1959,the United Nations general assembly,the delegates consistent praise her contribution to human.In 1968,Helen Keller calm go through her hard and full of glory.
A deaf and blind can have made so great achievement,how amazing and admiration.If Helen succumb to unfortunate fate,so,she will become a poor and foolish dodger.But she didn't head to fate,she with amazing perseverance,indomitable spirit,walked the way of life,and for the human make a great contribution,become a knowledgeable and respectable.Helen's life,is no ordinary.She gave people a great encouragement,so that those who idling people very regret.She is the kind of indomitable perseverance,make me forever,that it is I admire her reason
尽量写得和中国高中水平差不多.
我也有,她就是我最敬佩的人,海伦凯勒.相信大家都看过（假如给我三天光明）.这个惊动世界的文学巨作,就是出自那个双目失明,双耳失聪的残废女孩海伦凯勒
海伦?凯勒出生在美国南部.十九个月大时,因为一场大病,使得她从此失去了视力及听力.八岁时,海伦的母亲为她找到了一位家庭教师——安妮苏利文小姐,并进入帕金斯盲校学习.十六岁时,海伦进入哈佛大学附属剑桥女子学院学习英文史,德文,拉丁文,数学及许多文学名著.四年后,她如愿进入哈佛大学,开始尝试写作.大学毕业后,海伦把心力集中在推行盲人关怀的社会运动上,诸如出版盲人刊物,成立保障盲胞的委员会,使得盲人的心声终于受到社会的重视.一九五九年,在联合国大会中,各国代表一致称赞她对人类的贡献.一九六八年,海伦凯勒平静的走完她艰辛又充满荣耀 .
一个盲聋人能取得这么大的成就,是何等的令人惊讶和钦佩.如果海伦屈服于不幸的命运,那么,她将成为一个可怜而又愚昧的寄生者.然而她并没有向命运低头,她以惊人的毅力,顽强的精神,走完了人生的道路,并为人类作出了伟大的贡献,成为一个知识广博、令人尊敬的人.海伦的一生,是不平凡的.她给予人们极大的鼓舞,使那些虚度光阴的人万分悔恨.她的那种坚忍不拔的毅力,使我为之感动,这就是我敬佩她的原因.额.这是中文原文.如果需要分的话,我可以去开几十个新号去给分你~
Everyone has an admire historical figure?I also have,she is the person I admire most,Helen Keller.I believe you have seen (if gave me three days light).This is the famous book which moved the wold,be from the blind and deaf mutilated girl keller
Helen Keller was born in America,south.Nineteen months old,because a bad illness,making her since then lost eyesight and hearing.Eight,Helen's mother for her to find a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan,and enter the perkins copyright learning.At age 16,Helen into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history,German,Latin,mathematics and many literary classics.Four years after that,she goes into Harvard University,began to try writing.After graduation from the university,Helen heart concentrated in pushing the blind care the social movement,such as publishing blind journals,established security blind cell committee,making the blind by society heart finally value.In 1959,the United Nations general assembly,the delegates consistent praise her contribution to human.In 1968,Helen Keller calm go through her hard and full of glory.
A deaf and blind can have made so great achievement,how amazing and admiration.If Helen succumb to unfortunate fate,so,she will become a poor and foolish dodger.But she didn't head to fate,she with amazing perseverance,indomitable spirit,walked the way of life,and for the human make a great contribution,become a knowledgeable and respectable.Helen's life,is no ordinary.She gave people a great encouragement,so that those who idling people very regret.She is the kind of indomitable perseverance,make me forever,that it is I admire her reason
尽量写得和中国高中水平差不多.
我也有,她就是我最敬佩的人,海伦凯勒.相信大家都看过（假如给我三天光明）.这个惊动世界的文学巨作,就是出自那个双目失明,双耳失聪的残废女孩海伦凯勒
海伦?凯勒出生在美国南部.十九个月大时,因为一场大病,使得她从此失去了视力及听力.八岁时,海伦的母亲为她找到了一位家庭教师——安妮苏利文小姐,并进入帕金斯盲校学习.十六岁时,海伦进入哈佛大学附属剑桥女子学院学习英文史,德文,拉丁文,数学及许多文学名著.四年后,她如愿进入哈佛大学,开始尝试写作.大学毕业后,海伦把心力集中在推行盲人关怀的社会运动上,诸如出版盲人刊物,成立保障盲胞的委员会,使得盲人的心声终于受到社会的重视.一九五九年,在联合国大会中,各国代表一致称赞她对人类的贡献.一九六八年,海伦凯勒平静的走完她艰辛又充满荣耀 .
一个盲聋人能取得这么大的成就,是何等的令人惊讶和钦佩.如果海伦屈服于不幸的命运,那么,她将成为一个可怜而又愚昧的寄生者.然而她并没有向命运低头,她以惊人的毅力,顽强的精神,走完了人生的道路,并为人类作出了伟大的贡献,成为一个知识广博、令人尊敬的人.海伦的一生,是不平凡的.她给予人们极大的鼓舞,使那些虚度光阴的人万分悔恨.她的那种坚忍不拔的毅力,使我为之感动,这就是我敬佩她的原因.额.这是中文原文.如果需要分的话,我可以去开几十个新号去给分你~
Everyone has historical figure admired. I also have one, who is the person I admire most, Helen Keller. I believe you have seen the article if gave me three days light. This is the famous book which moved the wold, writen by the blind and deaf girl Keller.
Helen Keller was born in Southern America. 19 months after she was born, because of a serious illness, she lost her eyesight and hearing. At the age of 8, Helen's mother found a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan for her, and enter the Perkins to study. At age 16, Helen entered into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history, German, Latin, mathematics and many literary classics. Four years after that, she goes into Harvard University, began to write. After graduation from the university, Helen concentrated on pushing the blind care movement, such as publishing blind journals, establishing security blind cell committee. And she finally made the bind peoples voice be heard. In 1959,at the United Nations general assembly, the delegates consistently praised her contribution to human. In 1968, Helen Keller calmly went through her life hard and full of glory .
A deaf and blind women could have made so great achievements, It's amazing and worth admiring. If Helen submitted to unfortunate fate, she might become a poor and foolish lodger. But she didn't bend to fate, she with amazing perseverance and indomitable spirit, walked on the way of life, and made a great contribution to the human.She become a knowledgeable and respectable woman. Helen's life was not ordinary. She inspired the failed people and made people idoling feel regret. She perseverance moved me, that it is the reason why I admire her.
Helen Keller was born in Southern America. 19 months after she was born, because of a serious illness, she lost her eyesight and hearing. At the age of 8, Helen's mother found a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan for her, and enter the Perkins to study. At age 16, Helen entered into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history, German, Latin, mathematics and many literary classics. Four years after that, she goes into Harvard University, began to write. After graduation from the university, Helen concentrated on pushing the blind care movement, such as publishing blind journals, establishing security blind cell committee. And she finally made the bind peoples voice be heard. In 1959,at the United Nations general assembly, the delegates consistently praised her contribution to human. In 1968, Helen Keller calmly went through her life hard and full of glory .
A deaf and blind women could have made so great achievements, It's amazing and worth admiring. If Helen submitted to unfortunate fate, she might become a poor and foolish lodger. But she didn't bend to fate, she with amazing perseverance and indomitable spirit, walked on the way of life, and made a great contribution to the human.She become a knowledgeable and respectable woman. Helen's life was not ordinary. She inspired the failed people and made people idoling feel regret. She perseverance moved me, that it is the reason why I admire her.