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Being a teenager is stressful
Being a teenager now is very stressful.Firstly,being a teenager is stressful because of schoo.For example,teenagers all has a lot homewroks and tests,and they have to study and recite informations because they all want to get good marks,so most of them study really hard,but this makes them have no time to relax.Also some teachers are mean or strict,so teenagers get too stressed.Secondly,teenagers are having problems with realationshops.Like family problems.Some family are poor and they do not have enough money to pay what is needed and some parents are divorced and this make teenagers very stressed,they might not concentrate on their works.Also teenagers has issues about friend relationships,because of something that does not really matter,people might break up with their friends,and some teenagers are mean,so they make fun at others.Finally,time management is also a problem with teenagers too.Teenagers joined lots after school clubs,councils and sports,so teenagers has no time to play,and some teenagers also have extra-school activities such as piano lessons,guitar lessons,night school,having tutors and summer school.Also some of them have after school part-time jobs,They really have tight schedules.In conclubsion,homeworks,tests and teachers from school,family or friend relationship problems and time management such as after school activities or part-time jobs all make teenagers suffer from stress.
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Being a teenager is stressful
Being a teenager now is very stressful. Firstly, being a teenager is stressful because of school. For example, teenagers all have a lots homewrok and tests, and they have to study and memorize information, because they all want to get good marks, so most of them study really hard, but this makes them have no time to relax. Also some teachers are strict, so teenagers get too stressed. Secondly, teenagers are having problems with realationship, such as family problems. Some families are poor and they do not have enough money to pay what is needed and some parents are divorced, and this makes teenagers very stressed. They might not concentrate on their work. Moreover teenagers have issues about friend relationship, because of something that does not really matter.People might break up with their friends, and some teenagers are mean, so they make fun to others. Finally, time management is also a problem with teenagers. After school, teenagers joined a lots clubs , councils and sports, so teenagers have no time to play, and some teenagers also have extra-school activities such as piano lessons, guitar lessons, night schools, having tutors and summer schools. Also some of them have part-time jobs, They really have tight schedules. In conclusion, homeworks, tests and teachers from school, family or friend relationship problems and time management such as after school activities or part-time jobs all make teenagers suffer from stress.